First draft
comments:
-write when it comes out
-change font for 'couch potato' etc
-rated 7/10, 8/10 and 9/10
-followed conventions of a print advert
-image fits Rizzle Kicks conventions
second draft
comments
-well done a much more visually enticing image
-a great deal better then your first draft. you can tell you have taken our comments on board
-very funny image
-looks good, only needs two ratings, three looks cluttered
comments:
-make more conventional
-make sure you use the same font as for print advert
-include info and record company codes
-add acknowledgements
-use both Rizzle Kicks characters
-try with couch potato picture as front cover
comments:
-i like the solo pictures
- the laid back theme of the pictures suits the rizzle kicks theme
- The front image has a great visual impact.
- I like that you show them eating. it suits the lyrics of the songs in the albums.
-try and see if there is any way to make the writing more visible, if not it looks good anyway
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