MY EVALUATION

This is my evaluation of My Music Video, Digipak and Print Advert.

I apologize for the few nervous mistakes I made in my speech.

OFFICIAL COURSEWORK TASKS

These are the products that I have produced at the end of my coursework tasks.

MY MUSIC VIDEO 

MY DIGIPAK

MY PRINT ADVERT

Rough Cut of Couch Potato- Music Video

This is a rough cut f my music video. watching this I know that I need to make improvements on certain areas but this is a rough idea of what my aim is for the video and I hope to have created some funny ideas in this film.
The music for the Rough cut video doesn't work, therefore to understand the full effect you may need to play the song below at the same time to feel the full effect of the song.

comments:
-people thought it was urban hip hop
-fits the conventions of Rizzle kicks videos
-should use a duo to creat 'Rizzle Kicks' rather than just 'Rizzle'
-should use more takes of the duo lipsyncing important lyrics
-use more performance
-work on steady cam work - try doing work on a clear street, have 'Rizzle Kicks' rapping down the street- lots of close ups and mid-shots
-use Wendy instead of the dog
-remember Rizzle Kicks focus on image so can loose some of the narrative to have 60% performance.



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Rough Cut - Print Advert and Digi-Pack

First draft

comments:

-write when it comes out

-change font for 'couch potato' etc

-rated 7/10, 8/10 and 9/10

-followed conventions of a print advert

-image fits Rizzle Kicks conventions

second draft

comments

-well done a much more visually enticing image

-a great deal better then your first draft. you can tell you have taken our comments on board

-very funny image

-looks good, only needs two ratings, three looks cluttered

comments: 

-make more conventional

-make sure you use the same font as for print advert

-include info and record company codes

-add acknowledgements

-use both Rizzle Kicks characters

-try with couch potato picture as front cover   

comments:

-i like the solo pictures

- the laid back theme of the pictures suits the rizzle kicks theme

- The front image has a great visual impact.

- I like that you show them eating. it suits the lyrics of the songs in the albums.

-try and see if there is any way to make the writing more visible, if not it looks good anyway

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